So I guess I’m making this into a habit: every Friday, a little break from the grind, a little recreational writing, a little not-quite-so-earnest fun. This here’s a revision of something I did for a surrealist/avant-garde writing course I greatly enjoyed co-teaching in the Spring. Despite my revisionary efforts, it’s still got its goofs and clichés (my MFA was in fiction writing, not poetry), and the rhythm limps and stumbles in places (though some of those stumbles are intentional and useful), and it’s got bits and pieces stolen from other writers (as does the American Tarot thing): but, still, fun.
The Devil in His Birthday Suit
or
Jacqueline Kennedy Onassis Has Lunch by the Lake of Fire
Blind boy stands before the sea
No sightless gaze no face no window
No cold sea no widow glass or bare
His own son father’s son nude and cold
Morning son morning star bears him flame
Darkening the shore’s soft sand descent
Cast down like clothes crescent robe-veiled
Covers darkened brow his sweetness
Licks the soft bones clean and silent
And the chorus in the sea calls his names
Leviathan Belial Orcus Asmodeus
With voices scoured clean and parched
Dry as bones as gravity as dirt and copper
Falls like sound like wingless clouds
The boy stands and burns before the sea
Naked hides his light his cloak delight
No more garments show than shadows
And by the shore a table two chairs flank
Set and empty windless wet where she
The widow stares past him at the sea
Stares through and past his sightless eyes
Through the sea the paupers merchants
Liars losers drowning in the flame
They sit the boy O the widow veil black
Quiet wise Jackie stands unbuttons he cannot
See he cannot but only lie always see
Light-bringer sees as retribution’s voyeur
Sees as Jackie stoops deliberate
She bends and shows him
Death in her blouse.
JC ·
Nice rack!
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